People believe the society would benefit from a ban on all forms of advertising because it serves no useful purpose, and can even be damaging. However, others argue that there are still some advantages of adverts.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Advertising has taken many different forms these days. While some people believe that advertising serves no useful purpose in the society there are others who think there are still some advantages of adverts. Here in this essay I shall try to discuss both the views & give my opinion on it.
To commence with, it seems logically right to put a ban on all forms of advertising and the simplest reason one can find is that the advertisements are often misleading. Companies advertise their brands with an intent to increase their personal profits, many a times using inappropriate methodologies. Furthermore they hire celebrities to speak for their products, or use CGI affects to visually create things which are otherwise not real. General public, unaware of the facts often fall prey to such traps, thus being tricked into buying the products which can harm them over prolonged usage.
However, completely banning the advertising industry will, first thing create an economic fallout since a large number of people are employed in it and they all will loose jobs. Secondly, not all the advertisements are misleading or harmful. The market is full of so many useful products, from medicines to baby products, from women hygiene to health products and all these products need advertising just so that people are aware of their availability. Sometimes government has to take help advertisement to convey something important to the general public.
To sum up I think not all forms of advertising should be banned, however there could be placed a meaningful check by some senior authority on what is being project to the common people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 23, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
Advertising has taken many different forms these days. While some people bel...
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Line 1, column 56, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... taken many different forms these days. While some people believe that advertising se...
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Line 5, column 260, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a time' or simply 'times'?
Suggestion: a time; times
...o increase their personal profits, many a times using inappropriate methodologies. Furt...
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Line 5, column 303, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Furthermore,
...imes using inappropriate methodologies. Furthermore they hire celebrities to speak for thei...
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Line 5, column 441, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: Public
...te things which are otherwise not real. General public, unaware of the facts often fall prey t...
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Line 9, column 105, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
... thing create an economic fallout since a large number of people are employed in it and they all ...
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Line 9, column 167, Rule ID: LOOSE_LOSE[4]
Message: Did you mean 'lose' (= miss, waste, suffer the loss etc.)?
Suggestion: lose
...le are employed in it and they all will loose jobs. Secondly, not all the advertiseme...
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Line 9, column 543, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...nt to convey something important to the general public. To sum up I think not all forms ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, still, thus, while, as to, i think, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1378.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14179104478 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77680486118 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.649253731343 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 429.3 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.7268704889 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.833333333 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3333333333 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.33333333333 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.335626194886 0.244688304435 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109048861469 0.084324248473 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0916090716846 0.0667982634062 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200106017332 0.151304729494 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.114518115375 0.056905535591 201% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.