People can eat a widely variety of food in other regions.As a result, it makes people eat more other regions food than the local one. Do the advantages outweigh disadvantages?
With economical globalisation and advanced technology in transportation, food grown in other regions of the country or around the world make up a larger percentage of people’s diets than those in the area. In my opinion, although this development could help with lack of food diversity and food shortage, introducing non-local food has greater negative impacts on environment and poses threats onto the local farming.
Firstly, the availability of produce and other products from distant places benefits the local people who suffer from limited food diversity and helps with irresistible food scarcity. The most common limitation in some areas is a lack of fresh produce options during the off-season in the temperate zone. However, the supplement of imported food can allow people living in northern hemisphere to enjoy fresh fruits and vegetables which are grown in warm temperatures. It becomes easier for some locals to have a stable and balanced diet. Such food provision also alleviate suffering from food shortage / reduce shortage level in some areas where land used for agricultural usage is minimal like Greenland or Singapore.
The invasion of foreign food in the local market, however, has detrimental impacts on the local farmers and deteriorate the environmental issues. One major concerns is that our food choices worsen the air pollution and further the footstep of global warming everywhere around the world. The more reliance we have on non-local food, which are basically transported by vehicles, the more harmful air pollution is produced through the regional transports. Meanwhile, these exhausts are one of the attributes to global warming. Another victim under the effect of the change in people’s diet is the local farming. With the reduced craze for the local food, local farmers fail to compete with larger-scale manufacturers. They have no way but face the sobering financial reality, the high cost of producing but lack-luster income. To bear no further loss, many of them step away from the farm. The abandoned farmland turning out to be waste land is the sound evidence to the failure of local farms.
In conclusion, while the introduction of food grown non-locally can address the famine and limited food diversity of some areas, the damage to environment and local agriculture spreads further globally.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, so, while, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1983.0 1615.20841683 123% => OK
No of words: 370.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35945945946 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38581623665 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86616588764 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581081081081 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 622.8 506.74238477 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 9.0 2.52805611222 356% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.1443041436 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.647058824 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7647058824 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.41176470588 7.06120827912 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.287088233951 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0876521937752 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0639839282222 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187317730982 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0371816851568 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.54 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 78.4519038076 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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