People can perform everyday tasks, such as shopping and banking, without meeting other people face to face. What are the effects of this on individual and society?
In recent era, resources of varieties of work are easily available on the internet due to technological advancement. So, group of people can do their tasks at their home without attending physical bodies like office and many more. there are some positive and negative effects of this work advancement, which would be explained in the passage ensuing below.
First of all, from the last decade, technological development is skyrocketing. As a result of this, mankind performs their everyday task like shopping, banking and other business activities by telecommuting way. In contrast, they do not need face to face interaction of their respective person. The resultant positive effects of this, is time consumption behind daily activities such as banking and business transactions, is too much low. Secondly, no restriction in time for doing several tasks like shopping, people can do shopping at any time. According to the survey, in U.S.A, 45 percentage Americans are doing their daily tasks at their home without attending meetings and offices.
On the other side, not only the positive effects of work advancement are there but there are some negative effects too, which occurs during the performing tasks in online mode. it is fact that online banking and business transactions are risky because of there are chances of hacking like an important information regarding business. finally, reliability on the online website or online transaction has also dropped down due to less security. According to the survey, conducted by government of India, jacking of online banking transactions are raised up to 12% in the past decade.
To conclude this topic, it can be finally commented that, people can perform their daily tasks, by identifying it's both resultant effects and choose their way by meeting or online conversation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, in contrast, in general, such as, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1571.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39862542955 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87711172415 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.573883161512 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 498.6 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.5809040102 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.214285714 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7857142857 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.78571428571 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260350452483 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0792442913299 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0624182996254 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157968479854 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0525254641552 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.04 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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