In the contemporary era, some people tend to purchase cheaper products available in the community. Although there are several advantages to this trend, I think the drawbacks are vastly greater.
On the plus side, it is by no means negligible that buying cheaper goods has benefits for consumers.
This trend could be very helpful to deal with financial problems in today’s recessions. People can purchase their favorite or necessary goods with less price that helps them to invest their money in a better way such as having a vacation in a foreign country. To illustration, some stores sell their products off at a discount that draws a large volume of people from different areas to buy things at an adequate cost. Moreover, cheaper products are the only choice for some group of people especially those with lower financial means that can not afford to buy expensive goods. Take laborers with a lower-wage range that could not meet their needs without these cheaper goods as an example.
On the other hand, products at a low cost may be fake or have a poor quality that would hurt people's health. For example, some markets and grocery stores sell their nutrients with a discount when they are close to their expiration date. In some cases, these goods may pass their expire dates. So using them could have irreversible harm for health. Moreover, cheap shoes or clothes do not have a long life and they quickly lose their shape and usability.
In conclusion, from my point of view, inexpensive products are not usable even for an acceptable time and also in terms of the food they could be harmful to our health.
- Television is dangerous because it destroys family life and any sense of community instead of visiting people and talking with our family we just watch television To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion 67
- Some of the methods used in advertising are unethical and unacceptable in today s society To what extent do you agree with this view 61
- Some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about a person s culture and character from their choice of clothes Do you agree or disagree 78
- Many criminals commit further crimes as soon as they released from Prison What do you think are the causes of this What possible solutions can you suggest 84
- Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of the society Others however believe that school is the place to learn this Discuss both views and give your opinion Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant exam 89
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, moreover, so, as to, for example, i think, in conclusion, such as, in some cases, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1342.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8273381295 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47485151394 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.593525179856 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 408.6 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.8139281539 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.8571428571 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8571428571 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.14285714286 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180115441153 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0657517557285 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0394481527311 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103634057809 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0482261095681 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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