people have different views on how to reduce traffic congestion. Some think that government should build more train and subway lines, while others think that building more roads and widening existing roads will reduce traffic congestion. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
In contemporary time, there is a proliferation of consensus that traffic congestion has been concentrating on state-of-the-art society. Notwithstanding, to deal with this problem, people are divided into alternative resolution whether wider roads is the most effective way in the developing countries or constructing more trains and subways is superior to protect the environment. I am biased towards the former opinion and the following essay will be analyzed in both views in-depth.
Initially, it is essential to recognize that cars and motorbikes is one of the major transportation in the developing countries like Vietnam. Therefore, a well-built infrastructure and expand the roads will drive a great-contribution to the transfer for community. To be more specific, a number of desperate accidents will be restricted with the cutting-edge road systems instead of only two lanes.
On the flip side, it is equally pivotal to acknowledge that trains and subway lines are able to avoid squandering the natural resources and enhance the responsible of citizens for using the public transports. As a result of participating subject that users is possible to save money and reduce the carbon dioxide emissions of cars. Moreover, it is an inevitable and undisputed fact that subway lines is faster and does carry loads. Besides, person have highly alcohol content will be safer this transportation instead of driving their car.
Beyond any doubt, it is obvious that both views also have separately merits. Despite the fact that subways are less flexibility than others transportation, it is useful for a friendly environment. I hope that the civic can use more public transport in the long run.
- Some people think that technology makes life complex and that we should make life simpler without using technologies To what extent do you agree or disagree 84
- Some industrialized countries have serious environmental problems. The damage to the environment is an inevitable result when a country tends to improve the standard of living. What extent do you agree or disagree? 89
- Children who grow up in families which are short of money are better prepared with the problems of adult life than children who are brought up by wealthy parents. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 84
- There are many advertisements directed at children. Parent argue that children misled, while advertisers consider advertising a source of useful information. What is your opinion? 78
- Some people believe that teenagers should concentrate on all school subjects, while others claim that students should focus on the subject that they are best or that they find interesting. Discuss both of view ad give your opinion. 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 266, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... more public transport in the long run.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1430.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37593984962 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.30116290451 2.80592935109 118% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.624060150376 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.7809954839 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.0 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4615384615 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.07692307692 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195983671744 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0564889102817 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0316351297571 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10785286304 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0330709926144 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.85 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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