Some people think that technology makes life complex, and that we should make life
simpler without using technologies. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In contemporary time, the ubiquitous of cutting-edge technologies has never ceased to draw public attention and spark controversies. However, for those who opponents argue that young people has been losing contact with their own family and value traditional since the Internet appearance. From my perspective, the state-of-the-art equipments would gain both advantages and disadvantages for following reasons.
On the one hand, it is noteworthy that the modern devices are tend to drive several problematic for users. Firstly, almost younger generation are using the Internet as a good support for their job and daily activities such as sending mail,watching movie and shopping online , result in they would become inactive and unpleasant in case without using this innovation. Secondly, the children spend their pretty time for playing online games instead of playing a common game for children in the past such as blind-man’s
buff. Consequently, the manual labour economies are replaced by the knowledge-based economies which would losing the majority of farmer’s jobs.
On the other hand, notwithstanding the aforementioned that technological equipments brought various benefits to human being. A typical evidence, depending on the universe industrial development as the rocket which help some astronauts fly to another planets. Moreover, it connects our world nearer and easier; thereby, we could broaden mind via searching anythings on the Internet rapidly and remain the relationship with our oversea friends on Facebook, Instagram and Snapchat. In addition,the technological industries pay attention the huge of young labour which has contributed to resolve unemployment problems.
In conclusion, although the cutting-edge technologies have a number of disadvantages, I believe that it could be tackled and the smartly devices would play a vital role to shape a newly industry in the long run.
- Some people think that children should learn to compete, but other think that they should be taught to cooperate with others. What's your opinion? 84
- Children are experiencing the increasing educational social and commercial pressures What are the causes What measures do you think can be taken to reduce them 16
- Children who grow up in families which are short of money are better prepared with the problems of adult life than children who are brought up by wealthy parents. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 84
- Some industrialized countries have serious environmental problems. The damage to the environment is an inevitable result when a country tends to improve the standard of living. What extent do you agree or disagree? 89
- Some people think that art ( such as painting and music) does not directly improve the quality of people's lives, so the government spends money on other areas. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 89
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, firstly, however, moreover, second, secondly, so, in addition, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1633.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.75 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.26526247922 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.658450704225 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 492.3 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.1531345042 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.083333333 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6666666667 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8333333333 7.06120827912 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0832724047456 0.244688304435 34% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.028284997018 0.084324248473 34% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0239926753363 0.0667982634062 36% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0387354563297 0.151304729494 26% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0239694434509 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.37 12.4159519038 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.78 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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