People have long imagined that possibility that life exists on other planets Do you believe that there is life in the inverse outside of earth What would be the implication of proving that alien exist

Essay topics:

People have long imagined that possibility that life exists on other planets. Do you believe that there is life in the inverse outside of earth? What would be the implication of proving that alien exist?

Some people have a belief that life is also possible in other than our planet. I opine with them because the research outcome suggests that the resources which supports life are available on other planets too. Moreover, this is just research findings of our solar system, other systems exist too in the galaxy which is yet to explore.

Firstly, there are two main reasons why I believe that life is possible outside of earth, one is that scientists have already proven some resources which can possibly support life in other planets. In other words, they have strong evidence that water and salt particles are on the surface of many planets. Another crucial reason to believe this belief is that scientists have just reached up to our solar system, there are millions and millions of other systems available in just one galaxy which is yet to get explore so the chance of getting life is still there.

Moreover, there would be many things that can happen if scientists get succeed to find other creatures like a human. First of all, people would get panic because the situation of uncertainty would develop and this can end up of giving very threatening to human species. Secondly, In order to get sure, scientists would try to analyse them first, instead of jeopardising the human species. They would try to identify the risk factors first and if they found any risk in communicating them, they would try to avoid to communicate them but if they found them unrisky, it would widen the area of research, besides, a human can learn many teams related to other species and our species also by relating to them.

In recapitulation, many people have the belief that life is also possible outside of earth and I also believe the same because scientists have found many resources, which supports life in other planets too. Also, great reaches on the universe is still remained so the chance would be there to find life outside the earth. If scientists prove that the other specie is also available outside the earth, then the first reaction of the people would be anxious, but if the species found harmless then there is a chance that humanity may learn plenty of stuffs from them.

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 155, Rule ID: MAY_COULD_POSSIBLY[1]
Message: Use simply 'can'.
Suggestion: can
...ave already proven some resources which can possibly support life in other planets. In other...
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Line 5, column 508, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'avoid communicating'.
Suggestion: avoid communicating
...n communicating them, they would try to avoid to communicate them but if they found them unrisky, it...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, then, first of all, in other words

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1808.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 377.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79575596817 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4064143971 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35676653795 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.424403183024 0.561755894193 76% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 561.6 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.9167236083 49.4020404114 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.076923077 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.0 20.7667163134 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.07692307692 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.298867063393 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129166651674 0.084324248473 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0853599822218 0.0667982634062 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.202861281028 0.151304729494 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0811764401054 0.056905535591 143% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 50.2224549098 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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