People live in large cities have face many problems in everyday life. What are those problems. Should the government encourage the people to move to regional town.
It is incontrovertible fact that urbanisation is increasing day by day for comfortable and better lifestyle. However, the city dwellers are face many problems in this area and it have one major solution to move the people rural areas. This essay examines the both aspects and discuss some solution to solve this problem.
To embark with, there are a lot of problems which people are mostly face in urban area. The first is pollution, it is increase because of their everyday activities like use of vehicles more which increase the amount of CO2 in environment. Also, mobs are suffering with various respiratory diseases or lungs cancer. Secondly, the cost of living is higher than small areas, inhabited of cities pay the higher price for housing, food and transport. In addition to this, they also suffer with the social problems. For example, crime and poverty become a major problem large city. Because of unemployment and population and life becomes stressful and unhealthy in this areas.
However, there is some solution to curb this problem the government should encourage the people to live in other areas. This is only possible when they will offer the better facilities in another areas. To exemplify, they can move factories, construct the school or colleges in small towns. As well as, they can give the transport system in this areas because in that why, they can improve condition of big cities. The dwellers are mostly move urban area because of this facilities.
In conclusion, the city's life give the people better career option and facilities beside, this it have some drawbacks. But, if government will give the better policies to people in small areas then, people can enjoy the better life in cities as well as in small areas.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, well, for example, in addition, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1459.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9795221843 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55674912112 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.525597269625 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 467.1 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.5383344012 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 85.8235294118 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2352941176 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.82352941176 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253261999244 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0818036352793 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0894455015972 0.0667982634062 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15929253855 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0376702891306 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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