Tourism has negative impact on certain destinations some people believe that particular tourists are to be blamed for that discuss the specific negative impact I your country and suggest solutions
Nowadays, tourism is one of the important thing which help to raise economy of the country. however, it has certain effect on the tourist attracting place because of unaware and irresponsible tourists. this essay examines negative impacts on different destinations by tourist along with some possible solution to curb this problem.
To embark with, india is popular for historical places and temples so, every year a thousand of people come there for travelling . but, the number of travellers are damage the infrastructure of these places by their activities. To epitomize, people are commonly written on the walls of buildings, which is known as vandalism. And, it spoil the beauty, structure and effected the maintains cost of these buildings.
In addition to this, the burgeoning of visitors also affected the natural habits. The adventure and eco tourism on it peak in india. tourist like to spent the vacations in the lap of nature as well as in hill stations or on beaches and they prefer to do adventures sports in these places. As a result, there are rapidly increase overall environment degradation and polluted both air and water. because, they put garbage on these places. And, the people of these places started to cut trees to give the better facilities to tourists like hostels.
however, it has few proper solutions to control this problem. The government should make the rule and regulations for these places. they should take the consulting those people are do not aware about these destinations.
In conclusion, the tourism had not only demerits for the nation but to sort out this problem is must important because now it is easiest to solve it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, well, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1403.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08333333333 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71909944744 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.601449275362 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 440.1 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.9515750811 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.5294117647 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2352941176 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165437934259 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0439323268521 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0545766528468 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0875603430941 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0676906774687 0.056905535591 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.