Living in big cities is becoming a challenging trend for some people. Those residing in large urban areas tend to confront numerous issues in regular day to day existence. This essay will explain what kind of problems they must face and give some reasons why the government should recommend those people to migrate to smaller towns.
There are two underlying problems people have to face when they decide to live in big cities. First is the difficulties in the job seeking resulted from extremely limited employment chances. People in big cities must compete with other job seekers at the same time. This phenomenon seems to be a jungle law, which means that the stronger will be the winner. Moreover, it becomes worse when they do not have high qualifications to apply in a particular working sector. The other problem is pollution which also leads to some derivative effects for people in big cities. They are exposed by a massive amount of carbon emissions from vehicles and industries and have probabilities of suffering respiratory diseases. These two main problems determine their lives.
To deal with those issues, encouraging people to move to regional cities becomes a necessity and should be done by the government. If partial populations of big cities move to smaller towns, it can benefit both the environment and those citizens. It can decrease the use of private vehicles which means that it will also have a positive relation to air pollution. Besides, regarding the moving people, they can afford cheap accommodations, gain better air conditions, and expand their employment opportunities. These are the reasons why the government should push those people to move.
In conclusion, people living in big cities have difficulties in looking for jobs and gaining fresh air. These are the reasons why those people should move to regional cities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, if, look, moreover, regarding, so, in conclusion, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1562.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13815789474 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72116429324 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.536184210526 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 487.8 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.0975371237 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 86.7777777778 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8888888889 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.38888888889 7.06120827912 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.338218001081 0.244688304435 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107834373447 0.084324248473 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.097877902202 0.0667982634062 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.223985772456 0.151304729494 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.043563072715 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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