People living in large cities face several problems. What are these problems? Should governments encourage people to move to smaller towns?
It is true that living in big cities has become an increasingly popular trend nowadays. Several problems have resulted from this tendency, and I believe that governments should tackle these by encouraging people move to suburban areas.
Living in large cities, people have to face up to two main challenges. First, it is difficult for job seekers to have a job due to fierce competition in the job market. If there are not enough jobs for people, the likely hood of city dwellers being unemployed is considerably high. This results in wastage of human resources. Second, pollution has become increasingly more prevalent in the metropolises. Due to increase in number of vehicles over the years, the city roads witness frequent traffic congestions, but above the vehicles emitting pollutants are affecting human’s health badly. Besides, waste from manufacturing or chemical processes in industries contributes to water pollution as well as soil pollution, which carries potential health risks to the citizens.
There are variety of reasons why the official authorities should do encourage city dwellers move to smaller towns. One reason is that efficiently allocating the workforce of nation. Human resources would be allocated to decrease the unemployment rate in big cities and raise labor productivity, which contributes to increase economic growth. Furthermore, should authorities invest to develop infrastructure in a residential area, if the number of people moved to settle in there increases. Consequently, the quality of inhabitants’ life would be improved. For example, a school is built in remote area would improve the literacy rate of children because they are exposed to better educational programs.
In conclusion, the citizens of big cities can face with some challenge, and personally I think those people should be encouraged to relocate to regional areas.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, consequently, first, furthermore, if, second, so, well, for example, i think, in conclusion, as well as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1598.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.49140893471 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10213934274 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625429553265 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 510.3 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.0311945528 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.875 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1875 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0625 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.281165653728 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0793450540628 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103946311802 0.0667982634062 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18756389029 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0928643111127 0.056905535591 163% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.56 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.79 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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