In today's society, people tend to move to a larger city, which has more entertainment, job opportunities and more lively. However, while having all this happiness, still people face several problems, for example, traffic congestion and personal safety. Undeniably, I think that government shall encourage citizens to move to a smaller town.
First and foremost, traffic congestion, which is the most common issue in most of the cities. Not to mention, for own convenience, citizens nowadays own a vehicle. In fact, while the proportion of citizens in the city has risen, the number of vehicles will too be increased. As a result, people will become frustrated and might be late to work or school. Not only heavy traffic, but our natural air will also be polluted by the exhaust gas. Owing to delayed or break down, public transportation, especially in Kuala Lumpur, is highly not recommended and popular. Hence, the government shall spend more money to make some improvement. Social crimes, for instance, stealing and robbing, on the other hand, have surged year by year. Due to competition in the job market, many job seekers are unemployed and have become depressed, hence, turn out involving social crimes. As a consequence, citizens' safety is threatened.
From my perspective, the official authorities should encourage people to live in suburban. One of the reasons is that this will decrease the unemployment rate in the country. Additionally, the government should invest to develop infrastructure in a residential area, so it would attract people to settle in.
To sum up, people who live in an urban can face a lot of challenges, it is advisable that the government should allocate people into smaller towns.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 258, Rule ID: TOO_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'to be'?
Suggestion: to be
... has risen, the number of vehicles will too be increased. As a result, people will bec...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, so, still, while, for example, for instance, i think, in fact, as a result, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1447.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18637992832 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95986609269 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623655913978 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.9492667021 49.4020404114 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 85.1176470588 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4117647059 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.11764705882 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.299140095819 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0778418439938 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0970607400786 0.0667982634062 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.210236857838 0.151304729494 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102547825676 0.056905535591 180% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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