People living in large cities have to face many problems in everyday life. What are those problems?
Should the government encourage people to move to regional towns?
Humanity has come a long way from its origin with significant technological breakthrough and developments of countries. Living in the modern-day cities presents a huge amount of maladies, like traffic congestion, pollution, diseases and so on, for the human kind. As a solution to this, it is opined government should comment people to move to regional town or not.
Dwelling in metropolitan cities often present risks far more serious than one can imagine. One of the dominant risk factor is pollution which arises due to several reasons like increasing transport, deforestation, chemical wastage and many more things. Not only it reduces the amount of oxygen in the air, but also creates global warming by increasing CO2 along with harmful gases and promotes diseases such as asthma, hearing impairment, etcetera.
A solution put forward is to move people to regional towns. However, I do not think it is an ideal way to harness the situation as it is not because of cities that such problems are burgeoning, rather humans are responsible for this malady. To elaborate, various activities done by people to make their life comfortable and better give rise to many other problems. For instance, transport improvement are done for convenience of life but now, it is adversely affecting the environment and population by polluting the environment since most people prefer to travel by private transport even to a short distance.
To put the nail in coffin, it is better to lessen damaging human activities than shifting them to other towns as it will not aid sustainable development but also more environment protection measures.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, well, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1374.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20454545455 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94605423188 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.628787878788 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 440.1 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.5544188642 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.909090909 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202095142195 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0777283208041 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0838153595144 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102274632093 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0780416301848 0.056905535591 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.55 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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