Some people are making new friends by socializing network websites and internet chat rooms. Some people say that this is a good thing.Other people opine that people should make new friends by face to face chat. Discuss both views and given your own opinion.
Internet has emerged as a way of communication which connect the world together. For some people, it is a boon as they can become friends with any person throughout the globe, while, opposition says that making friends by interacting in person is far better. Both sides hold their views for several reasons which i will discuss further along with my opinion.
One irrefutable fact is how the technology has reshaped the way of interaction and sharing information on a wider scale. As a result, communicating with acquaintances, such as friends and family, living far away from the person has become easier as compared to past, in which, the only medium to keep in touch with other was either the letters or telephones. In addition, various social media websites like Facebook, Twitter and so on offer a large amount of opportunities to make friends from different cultures, languages and nations. Along with this, there is also video chatting, conferencing, and instant messaging which makes interaction with one or more persons quite easier.
However, some people opine that instead of making friends online on the internet, offline medium is better as it opens various perspectives of learning for a person. By getting together in-person, not only it becomes easier to learn about the other person, distinctiveness between fake and genuine friends also becomes quite plain. Moreover, meeting a person face to face help a person in gaining knowledge about the dressing sense, culture and behavior of the second person as the person tends to lie less when in front of other person.
Concluding the essay with my opinion, I believe in learning more and more about things around the world, hence, internet is a boon for other people in my opinion. However, it does not mean that face to face communication can become extinct. In my view, both ways can coexist together.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, if, moreover, second, so, while, in addition, such as, as a result, in my opinion, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1567.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05483870968 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71965329553 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561290322581 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 486.9 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.5660848279 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.538461538 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8461538462 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.84615384615 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186154482084 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0700421754455 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0591086391935 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115671024056 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0227981492737 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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