Some people say that self employment is better than the job.Discuss, what is your opinion?
Modern technology has shaped the system of working from home to its present appearance. To which, some people opine that working for your own self is better than working under someone else. In my opinion, both aspects of job have different factors to account for and to get.
As for the self-employment, it becomes easier for a person to work as he/she saves a lot of time by not travelling to work along with the money. To show this concept, a recent emerging trend of freelance working is something which has made more independent and efficient at hand tasks. Except this, it also makes spending time with family quite easier.
Alternatively, a job offers various prospects learning new things from colleagues as well as superior mentors like senior workers. Although, on the site job requires a person to travel to and from work, however, it also brings a sense of onus on the person as he/she is working under someone and may suffer from his dire actions. To cite an example, people who usually work on jobs tend to have better communication, socialization and other skills as compared to freelancers.
In the nutshell, both aspects have their own merits, and it is more a matter of choice than being the good or bad.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 83, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ier for a person to work as he/she saves a lot of time by not travelling to work ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, so, well, as for, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1018.0 1615.20841683 63% => OK
No of words: 213.0 315.596192385 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.779342723 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6560739824 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.629107981221 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 313.2 506.74238477 62% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.7722721626 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.8 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.7 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133751580711 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0545739684896 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0741715478856 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0812639999831 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0623698545433 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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