People living in large cities have to face many problems in everyday life. What are those problems?
Should the government encourage people to move to regional towns?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
In recent years, big cities have become attractive places to live in for most people due to the variety of facilities and high standard of living they offer. However, there are many problems connected with living in such cities, so the government should find solutions for these problems through encouraging people to leave them and live in small distant towns instead.
One of the biggest problems people living in mega cities suffer from is pollution. Because of the large number of vehicles that residents of cities use every day, a huge amount of fuel is burnt, resulting in high amounts of carbon in the atmosphere. Consequently, dwellers of cities are prone to sever health problems in the long term, such as heart diseases or even cancer which is a more sever issue. Furthermore, people in cities usually spend many hours in transportation because streets are always overcrowded, especially in rush hours where they are commuting to and back from their work places. This means that they do not have sufficient time to visit their relatives or even to ask about their neighbors. This in turn may end up them being socially isolated, which can deteriorate their psychological well-being and make them suffer depression.
To solve the previous problems, the government should promote the transfer of cities residents to small regional towns. This can be implemented through different steps. First of all, the authorities may develop these towns by developing new transportation systems and constructing new facilities, such as hospitals, schools, and parks. Secondly, they can create job opportunities to attract young people to come and work in. This can be performed through provision of new industries and investments. Finally, they should lower prices of accommodation in such towns to make it attractive for low-income people to live in.
In conclusion, people in cities suffer from a number of problems, such as pollution and social isolation. However, if the government implemented the previously proposed solutions, it would be possible for many people to leave big cities and live in distant small towns, which would lead to resolving the issues people in cities suffer from.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, finally, first, furthermore, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, well, in conclusion, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1847.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 353.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23229461756 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81985114522 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.526912181303 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 549.9 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.3213113402 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.4375 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0625 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.8125 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266569130462 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0896955929155 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0799677348333 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181651647912 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0648029380189 0.056905535591 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.