Some people feel that it is necessary to test new medicines on animals, while other people feel that this is not fair on animals and not necessary.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Testing new medicines on animals has always been a point of contention between those who support it and those who object it. While there are strong reasons to support medical testing on animals, I am bound to believe that it is unfair to animals and not essential.
On the one hand, supporters of testing on animals argue that it is an essential stage in testing medical drugs and potential cures. If drugs that can potentially cure chronic diseases are not tested on animals, there is no way to predict its effect on humans and ensure its effectiveness. Furthermore, there are many cures to different diseases that were discovered thanks to animal testing. To exemplify this, the effectiveness of chemotherapeutic drugs that help in curing cancer was tested on rats before it was approved on humans. Finally, because of animal rights laws, scientists make sure that animals do not suffer during these tests.
On the other hand, I would like to side with those who are against animal testing. Firstly and foremost, testing on animals is an immoral act; as humans have no right to subject animals through the pain and torture of medical testing. Secondly, many animals can die, possibly, in vain because of these experiments, which sometimes are only done for the sake of scientific journals rather than real medical tests. Thirdly, modern technology, specifically artificial intelligence, can simulate the drug effects without the need to use animals. For instance, in France, a potential drug for treating malignant brain tumors was tested on computers first, before it was approved for human testing.
In conclusion, while there are potential merits for animal testing related to its practicality and historical precedence, I believe the demerits weigh far heavier for moral and practical reasons.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, while, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1521.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20890410959 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76107053668 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565068493151 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 485.1 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.292041046 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 117.0 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4615384615 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2307692308 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14137136274 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0570059494327 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.02911245032 0.0667982634062 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.095349480953 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0313510164584 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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