people living in large cities today face many problems in their everyday life. What are these problems? Should government encourage people to move to smaller regional towns?
One of the most conspicuous issues in dis century in dis century is about metropolitans and their tremendous troubles. There is little room for denying dat megacities have been brining plenty of problems for both states and habitants. The source of these problems seem to derive from four major factors; some remedies can be taken to cope with them, one of these solutions could be encouraging people by government to live in smaller regional cities.
The first major problem tend to be related to scarcity in facilities. In these cities, due to the over population and lack of space, most of people's demands would be unfulfilled, such as entertainment. In these cities parks and other natural environment were turned to residential areas. Besides, these places are very time using. Citizens have to spend formidable volume of their time in traffic congestions in an effort to commute to their homes or workplaces, thereby living in these cities may cost people their life time. Aside from the cited factors, another paramount problem appear to be pollution. In these areas, high level of pollutions, such as water or air pollution are expected to occur TEMPthanks to the difficulty in sewage disposal discharge or mass number of cars, factories and so forth. These pollutions would lock individuals in struggle to suffer via various diseases, such as respiratory problems. As final problem, the level of existence stress could be hint. Competitions to acquire suitable life place, worthwhile job opportunity, yielding high income and others may lead people to soul problems, thus it may be at the expense of their calmness.
There are plenty of remedies to tackle with the problem of living in megacities; one of them is exerting an influence on people to choose smaller regional town for life by authorities. Not only does dis solution solve most of the aforementioned problems but also would ensure people's safe and welfare as well. If people migrated to smaller regional town or rural areas most of the overwhelming elements will be blurred, and people ca have clear schedule for their life. Aside from these governments can control every things more easily.
All in all, based on above mentioned facts, one can conclude dat living in megacities lead to obvious problems, such as various diseases, stress, wasting the time and lack in pleasure or calm. By migrating to small cities most of them can be coped.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 516, Rule ID: LIFE_TIME[1]
Message: Did you mean 'lifetime'?
Suggestion: lifetime
...g in these cities may cost people their life time. Aside from the cited factors, another ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, may, so, thus, well, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 68.0 41.998997996 162% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2019.0 1615.20841683 125% => OK
No of words: 399.0 315.596192385 126% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06015037594 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46933824581 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70956645349 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 176.041082164 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561403508772 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 636.3 506.74238477 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.2518284126 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.263157895 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.47368421053 7.06120827912 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.323889964409 0.244688304435 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0935353343923 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0747264144329 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196865220558 0.151304729494 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107352726145 0.056905535591 189% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 78.4519038076 141% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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