Living in large cities, people are faced with too many challenges. This essay will discuss these problems and I think people should be encouraged to live in the countryside.
Nowadays, living inhabitants in megacities, people face some serious problems. Firstly, getting stuck in a traffic jam, the valuable time of people is wasted valuable time in it which can affect their behavior. For example, sadness and stress are two of the common behavioral changes which people have to deal with. Moreover, not only do city dwellers suffered from air pollution but also they are exposed to too much noise pollution which can have a devastating impact on their health causing breathing problems as well as nervousness. Additionally, due to the high costs of living such as high rents as well as food costs, people have to work hard in order to earn more money to pay for the increasing daily expenditures.
I strongly believe that the problems which I mentioned above can be solved by the government encouraging citizens to live in small towns. Having to pay lower taxes in small cities, citizens can be encouraged to move to the countrysides more than to live in mega cities. As a result, this movement can be beneficial for a big family, for example, having more spaces for family members and each kid for playing. Furthermore, with these encouragements, environmental devastations will be reduced by separating people into small cities with some noticeable alerts about their health which they can be exposed to any pollutions in megacities.
To conclude, having discussed the problems in megacities and the results of encouraging migrants to move to a little town, I am firmly of the opinion that the officials should take actions to reduce the population in big cities to solve the problems mentioned above mainly environmental ones.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, moreover, so, well, for example, i think, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1538.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07590759076 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84854236366 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554455445545 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 480.6 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.2708569692 49.4020404114 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.166666667 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.25 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.295543778054 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122602498801 0.084324248473 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0817020789973 0.0667982634062 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.2162231071 0.151304729494 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0977229697896 0.056905535591 172% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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