Nowadays, metropolitan residents suffer much more from much pressure from work and life on a daily basis. Following this reason, the governments should not incentivise people to move to countryside regions to divide the population and minimize the burden for big cities.
From day to day, people living in urban areas have to handle obstacles from work and problems in daily life. When it comes to working issues, there are 2 types of difficulty, the first one is unemployment, the second one is pressure from work. Most of the immigrants in big cities do not prepare themselves formal qualifications and working experiences, therefore, they can hardly be recruited in companies and easily become unemployed. The last problem these people have face every day is that the high living standards in big cities which instigate poverty. Secondly, the pressure from work also exhausts the citizens from dust till dawn. That said personnel working in corporations must deal with overloaded tasks both in working places and their homes unless their salary could be cut off and their lives become much harder. Additionally, these people also have to combat with the immigrants for job recruitment.
For these reasons, it is necessary for the governments to persuade people to reside in regional towns to distance the population and mitigate daily problems people living in urban. Firstly, a list of benefits of living in the countryside including lower living standards and job opportunities should be conveyed by the government. That said regional residents can get satisfying jobs that do not require university certificates and they can raise their family as well as accumulate some amount of money for their old age. Secondly, the government should give appropriate privileges to these people to guarantee them a qualified life.
In conclusion, citizens in big cities have to deal with working and living pressure every day. As a result, the government should have precise policies to stimulate people to not move to urban areas.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 473, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'faced'.
Suggestion: faced
...yed. The last problem these people have face every day is that the high living stand...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, in conclusion, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1702.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22085889571 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80481511743 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.524539877301 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 536.4 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.6129511952 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.466666667 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7333333333 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.86666666667 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.306235419184 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112218839253 0.084324248473 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0899645309608 0.0667982634062 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192894133714 0.151304729494 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0621311014401 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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