People resist making changes due to several major reasons which are possible to solve. People face with neccessity of changes on different stages of their lifes such changes as moving house, changing workplaces are always made to achieve improvements, but people habitually refuse to change something in their everyday’s lives due to several major reasons which are possible to solve.
People usually resist making changes, mainly because they are judged by somebody from aside, because public opinion is valuable for them. As a result they start misjudging these exchanges and continue staying in their comfort zone. A good idea in this way would be to analyze all judgments and see how valuable they are. By doing this we would understand possible negative consequencies of changes better and would be away of how to overcome them.
Another reason for people to refuse to change their lives is uncertainty, about the outcome, because people are not sure what their changes would lead to, if they are going to succeed at this new situation. Consequently, they often miss the opportunities to improve their life conditions. The obvious solution here is to clarify the situation there are going to experience. For instance, by talking to somebody, who has undergone similar changes. In this way, we would be more away of the way of suceed in it and less afraid of misfortune (or bad lack).
Thus, although people resist making changes and continue to be the same thing everyday like a squirrel in the wheel, you can not waste life and live without changes.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...r reasons which are possible to solve. People usually resist making changes, mainly b...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, if, so, thus, for instance, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1305.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03861003861 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61269883394 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.57528957529 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 414.9 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.7139002757 49.4020404114 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.75 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5833333333 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.83333333333 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215802961243 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0765626355973 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0559009483565 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131079184488 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0296073563918 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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