people naturally resist making changes in their lives. What kind of problems of problems can this cause? Whats solutions you can suggest?
Change is inevitable law of nature; however some individuals refrain from bringing changes in their lives. A couple of factors are accountable for the particular mindset of the people, which can in turn lead to numerous threats including physical and mental illness, whereas potential measures to curb it are within the reach.
To commence with certain people, nowadays, are inclined towards eating junk food in excess by overlooking its deleterious impact on health. Because they find it more tastier than the home cooked food. As a consequence, they can get trapped by various lifestyle diseases like obesity, diabetes and heart related issues which in turn can have detrimental impact on their mental health by causing stress of poor physical health. Apart from this, multiple individuals, no matter what their age group is are found having addiction of drugs as well as alcohol, which most of them arise in themselves through their peers' influence and even if they try to get rid of it, they most of the times remain unable to do so because of being accustomed to it eventually they become violent and create perilous circumstances for others if they do not consume it thus they are more likely to have it rather than abandoning.
Probing towards solutions, primarily, governing bodies can take charge of making people aware regarding serious illnesses of binge-eating fast food, which contains enough fatty acids and oil through campaigns in different localities by health experts. The reason being, most of the human beings abstain themselves from watching health related talks on TV and social media since they mainly concentrate on entertainment. It would be, therefore, an easy approach to bring them together in community to listen hazards of consuming unhealthy food. Besides this, young children who are in habit of taking different drugs ranging from tobacco to heroine should be provided guidance by elderly people in their home by making them indulge in other activities at home or in drug leaving centers. In other words, with proper and immense care by somebody wiser can help drug addicts to get rid of it.
In conclusion, although several people who restrain from introducing change in their daily routine in terms of eating and addictions could lead to bring disaster in their lives the government and all people like parents as well as grandparents can be proved as a bone for them by assisting them through awareness campaigns and great and becoming great advisors
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 306, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'is'?
Suggestion: is
..., whereas potential measures to curb it are within the reach. To commence with c...
^^^
Line 3, column 141, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...oking its deleterious impact on health. Because they find it more tastier than the home...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 162, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'tastier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: tastier
... impact on health. Because they find it more tastier than the home cooked food. As a consequ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, however, if, look, regarding, so, therefore, thus, well, whereas, apart from, in conclusion, as well as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 74.0 41.998997996 176% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2089.0 1615.20841683 129% => OK
No of words: 407.0 315.596192385 129% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13267813268 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49157444576 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62555287154 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 243.0 176.041082164 138% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597051597052 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 633.6 506.74238477 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 20.2975951904 163% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 114.415179646 49.4020404114 232% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 174.083333333 106.682146367 163% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.9166666667 20.7667163134 163% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6666666667 7.06120827912 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162940318355 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0540744676859 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0448868747231 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101620082225 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0168572379941 0.056905535591 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.7 13.0946893788 150% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.98 50.2224549098 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.07 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.7 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 78.4519038076 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.1190380762 150% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 306, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'is'?
Suggestion: is
..., whereas potential measures to curb it are within the reach. To commence with c...
^^^
Line 3, column 141, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...oking its deleterious impact on health. Because they find it more tastier than the home...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 162, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'tastier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: tastier
... impact on health. Because they find it more tastier than the home cooked food. As a consequ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, however, if, look, regarding, so, therefore, thus, well, whereas, apart from, in conclusion, as well as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 74.0 41.998997996 176% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2089.0 1615.20841683 129% => OK
No of words: 407.0 315.596192385 129% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13267813268 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49157444576 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62555287154 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 243.0 176.041082164 138% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597051597052 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 633.6 506.74238477 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 20.2975951904 163% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 114.415179646 49.4020404114 232% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 174.083333333 106.682146367 163% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.9166666667 20.7667163134 163% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6666666667 7.06120827912 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162940318355 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0540744676859 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0448868747231 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101620082225 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0168572379941 0.056905535591 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.7 13.0946893788 150% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.98 50.2224549098 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.07 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.7 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 78.4519038076 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.1190380762 150% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.