Many government think that economic progress is their most important for some people never think that the source of progress are equally important for a country discuss both views and give your opinion
Economic growth is considered the fundamental aspect by governing bodies of certain nations, yet it is believed by many that other factors such as social equality is also crucial.Although both the notions seems to be imperative, I personally find a country should be economically sound, and intend to discuss both sides in the subsequent paragraphs.
To embark with, financial progress can lead to overall development of a country. The reason being, it would be able to invest in indispensable areas ranging from education to health and it would in turn lead to increase in literacy rate and health levels of the citizens. Eventually, these healthy and educated people will work hard in various sectors and country would able to complete on a global level. for instance, USA is the developed country owing to its rich economy. Moreover, the notion is extremely crucial to attain reputation worldwide since being economically rich, authorities do not need to seek financial assistance from other countries. If a nation does not have enough money to avail facilities to civilians it might lose its dignity. Consequently, neighbouring countries may try to suppress it which obviously can put detrimental effect on the whole population.
On the contrary, social equivalence is considered to play a vital role in success of province, for discrimination on the basis of culture, caste and colour could ruin it as there may be violence among inhabitants in terms of rights. Thus, such issues are necessary to be undertaken along with economic growth otherwise a non united nation cannot earn reputation on the global level. To illustrate as per survey by Yale University, 70% of the nations despite having not having enough money are respected because of their Unity.
To conclude, social issues should be taken care by the higher authorities; howeverrich economy must be focused more in order to develop a country in terms of all aspects including education and fitness.
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...ancial assistance from other countries. If a nation does not have enough money to ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, however, if, may, moreover, so, thus, for instance, such as, on the contrary, on the whole
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1656.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20754716981 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96776719147 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622641509434 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 532.8 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 73.3547317265 49.4020404114 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.0 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.16666666667 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.120995751852 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.040295788843 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0389841732941 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0691536076455 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0441382659544 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.04 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 21.0 9.78957915832 215% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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