People nowadays are surrounded by all kinds of advertising. Advertising affects what people think is important and it has a negative influence on people's lives.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
The question related to the influence of advertising on people's life has drawn the attention of the public in recent years. While I agree that advertising can bring deleterious effects, I also believe that it still provides many positive impacts.
On the one hand, advertising can inevitably cause viewers to feel negative sentiments. Furthermore, the repetition of certain advertisements not only on social media platforms but also on television can dictate viewers' opinions. Recently, there appear various inappropriate ads of sexual products such as condoms on almost every channel, and their detrimental contents are certainly not suitable for young viewers. Given that parents can not skip those indecent advertisements, this situational circumstance provokes negative feelings for them considerably. If this is the case, then advertising also plays an indispensable role in the notorious influences on humans' lives.
On the other hand, there exist many benevolent influences of advertising that need to be taken into consideration. Advertisements can be seen as a way for people to broaden their knowledge with educational content. If advertisements provide a wealth of useful information both learners and the public, people might look at advertising in the opposite direction. Specific advertisements of podcasts such as Tedtalk are essential in introducing people to a different method of learning. Sometimes, they even include a cut of the informative talk for around thirty seconds, which is adequate for everyone to feel intrigued. Therefore, there are positive impacts of advertising on our society.
In conclusion, advertising provides a wide range of positive effects on our lives, but it still exists various negative aspects of how advertising is used nowadays.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, look, second, so, still, then, therefore, while, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1523.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.66171003717 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.25635704368 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.624535315985 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 486.9 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.1372543634 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 108.785714286 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2142857143 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.42857142857 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242141801231 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0915362846913 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0602793941928 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153534440158 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0559491491659 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.55 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.63 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.