Environmental protection is the responsibility of politicians, not individuals as individuals can do too little.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
The question related to whether environmental protection lies in the hand of politicians or civilians has caused many controversies among the public in recent years. While I agree that politicians must acknowledge environmental issues, I also believe that each individual should take part in protecting the ecosystems as well.
On the one hand, environmental protection is what the higher role of the hierarchy should take into consideration. As a matter of fact, this is an alarming problem that has long-lasting consequences if they are not taken care of. To demonstrate, politicians could commence environmental campaigns, thus raising awareness of the citizens about the conditions of existing ecosystems. Undoubtedly, politicians can act as role models for everyone to attain a more profound understanding of the world they are living in, and that environmental issues are as important as other problems.
On the other hand, every small action of each person accounts for the major impact made on the environment. In fact, everyone must be conscious of their surroundings, as well as not taking a blind eye to severe environmental damages that are happening right now. For instance, if every household reduces its plastic usage, the total wastage could be minimized, henceforth contributing a substantial impact on the environment. With that being said, each action of every civilian has a remarkable impact on saving our existing ecosystems.
In conclusion, environmental protection is undoubtedly the responsibility of politicians, but individuals also play an indispensable role in making a better change to the planet.
- People nowadays are surrounded by all kinds of advertising Advertising affects what people think is important and it has a negative influence on people s lives To what extent do you agree or disagree 78
- In many places people s lifestyle is changing rapidly and this affects family relationships Do you think the advantages of those developments outweigh the disadvantages 84
- Some people think that sending criminals to prison is not effective Education and job training should be used instead To what extent do you agree or disagree 81
- Some people think that newspapers are the best way to learn the news However others believe that they can learn news better through other media Discuss both views and give your opinion 84
- Students should be taught academic knowledge so that they can pass exams and skills such as cooking or dressing should not be taught To what extent do you agree or disagree 95
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, thus, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, as a matter of fact, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1387.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.548 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.39676316513 2.80592935109 121% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.596 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 439.2 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.5330043698 49.4020404114 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 126.090909091 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7272727273 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.0909090909 7.06120827912 171% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187245444938 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0696404957437 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0581151657414 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128110383785 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0592252973541 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 50.2224549098 64% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.21 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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