People nowadays sleep less than they used to in the past. What do you think is the reason behind this? What are the effects on individuals and people around them?
Sleeping is the time your body needs to have a rest and recharge your energy . in the past many people used to sleep for a convenient time for their body as a contrast to what happens these days.
In this essay we will discuss why people sleep too little nowadays and how will it affect the society
A good sleeping period should be between 6 to 8 hours a day, but this is unlikely what usually happens . people nowadays have a huge number of tasks that they have to finish every day and that can take more than a day to be done. So, as a worker if you have to finish this task before going to your job tomorrow will you choose to doit whatever it takes, or you’ll just go to sleep because it’s your bedtime. Yes, this is the answer that most of the people choose to do . I need to finish working before going to bed.
So, less hours sleeping can cause severe problems to the society . as sleeping less number of hours can affect the body by making it tension and nervous . that’s why when there’s an event or a meeting many of the people attending feels over worried about it and tension . it also has a fatal effect on the society because when the person is not sleeping well, he feels that he’s already exhausted and unable to burry any other load on him . this can affect his mood and feelings of the person allover the day ad which is responsible for making problems between the people .
So insomnia or people sleeping less number of hours can cause social problems and weakness in the immune system that may cause many diseases to spread very quickly.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1280.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.39862542955 5.12529762239 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.11825324023 2.80592935109 75% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.522336769759 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 389.7 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.0993438055 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.4615384615 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3846153846 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.15384615385 7.06120827912 31% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 5.01903807615 418% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282629509839 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0958085510602 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0608946030738 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145864733546 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0401968108881 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.53 50.2224549098 148% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 11.3001002004 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.54 12.4159519038 69% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.95 8.58950901804 81% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 78.4519038076 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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