people nowadays spend less time with their families what are the reasons and effects of that
There is no doubt that happy family is an indispensable target; however; the absence of family time tends to be accelerating within the upward society. This essay would point out the grounds of this tendency and its adverse effects.
It is worthy that this drift is attributable to a host of reasons within the primary reason is the hectic schedule and being under massive amount of stress when students are occupied with both overwhelming schooling tasks to meet the higher expectation and associating in the social relationship in turn to adults they lose themselves in jobs for extra hours aim for better income for household arts. Furthermore, the advanced technology lead to the overuse when people wholly immerse in the social network for personal pursuit as private relationship, entertainment which deprive of the time together.
It deemed that undesirable consequences would perceive, directly to the young generation when being overly expose to social network by the neglectful parents and tend to be addicted and contributing to wrong doings and loss of momentum in study which may lead themselves to the violence and crime. For instance, due to the china rating crime 70% of juvenile delinquent are likely to endure the same pattern in childhood with the lack of family education. Besides parents maybe miss out the chance to witness their offspring growing and other priceless family moments cause the deficiency in strengthening family relationship likewise there tend to be more conflicts.
Thus above reason people are having less and less time for family by the immense pressure in life and it impact badly to both individuals and families
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...wise there tend to be more conflicts. Thus above reason people are having less and...
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Line 4, column 106, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'impacts'?
Suggestion: impacts
... by the immense pressure in life and it impact badly to both individuals and families ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, furthermore, however, if, likewise, may, so, then, thus, for instance, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1394.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20149253731 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78328196533 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.608208955224 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 439.2 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 20.2975951904 163% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 93.8772469771 49.4020404114 190% => OK
Chars per sentence: 174.25 106.682146367 163% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.5 20.7667163134 161% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.625 7.06120827912 165% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210563229335 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0913774931218 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0875876383025 0.0667982634062 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141814946831 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0902225366078 0.056905535591 159% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.8 13.0946893788 151% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.98 50.2224549098 76% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.99 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.1190380762 150% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 10.7795591182 186% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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