People nowadays tend to take their family to another country when they work abroad. Do advantages of this outweigh disadvantages?
There is a growing trend that people who have to work abroad would take their family along with them. While there are some significant challenges to deal with, I personally believe that the drawbacks are outweighed by the benefits.
The main difficulty that each person has to cope with when moving a new country is culture shock. Different norms and the attitude of local citizens may cause a sense of isolation, which is likely to make the adaptation more challenging in the first place. Either the African or the Asian have been struggled with racism once migrating to a Western country although this practice is prohibited and heavily fined. While the adaptation takes much time, foreigners have to deal with nostalgia and the somewhat strange food of the native country. Overseas students from Vietnam, for a typical example, often express they find it hard to adapt to Western flavors whereas it is demanding to find costly Vietnamese traditional food.
Having said that, moving to a new country means having new memorable and valuable experience. Taking a child along with their parents while working in a foreign country is the best opportunity for them to learn a new language while they can enjoy the care from both father and mother. Different experiences in different places with different people can contribute to broad their mind and give them a more profound knowledge about the world. In addition, when migrating to a developed country, the family is more likely to have a better quality of life accompanied with higher incomes. The best universities and hospitals are often located in those countries, so they would have a greater number of choices with regard to either education or healthcare services.
Weighing up both sides of the arguments again, although there are a number of problems that this trend could bring, predominantly culture-related ones, the benefits that it brings to the family are precious.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 10, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t brings to the family are precious.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, so, whereas, while, as to, in addition, with regard to, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1630.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12578616352 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66631806194 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572327044025 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 508.5 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.037089393 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.384615385 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4615384615 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.30769230769 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181933277718 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.064662432143 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0600531682367 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115786909157 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0554102768605 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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