Shopping is a common act for all people to carry out. There are some different beliefs about this matter that ages have affected more on shopping habits rather than other methods. In fact, I think this element can be effective but other factors should not be forgotten.
To begin with, marketing chain and shopping habits are sophisticated issues to discuss because there are enormous enterprises with various products that are trying to make money by performance of some tricky methods. Therefore, companies need to introduce their goods in different ways. Actually, one of the most impressive approachs to attract people for shopping is advertisement. This is a huge business around the world to present the products, for sample media and variety of websites are used to display the novel goods from many organizations.
In addition, as we can see, online shopping is exceedingly popular among people and products are purchased with different applications such as Instagram and what's up. These methods provide a good situation for shopping more because it is easy to use and there is no waste of time.
On the other hand, I agree about this matter that younger have shopping habits more than elders but marketing subject is not completely dependent on age, as I mentioned. According to this subject, adults have special eager about buying new goods and most of them are shopaholic indeed. That is why, products are more fascinated for lower ages than others.
In conclusion, shopping habits are not related only to different ages and I think there are many other factors which influence on this issue.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: what's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, if, so, therefore, i think, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1349.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09056603774 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6433416826 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.562264150943 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 424.8 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.1626914601 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.769230769 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3846153846 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.30769230769 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264544749526 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0980130199595 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0861142436272 0.0667982634062 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158770025207 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0683523623295 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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