People say that reading for pleasure helps people to develop imagination and better language skills than watching TV To what extent do you agree or disagree Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experien

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People say that reading for pleasure helps people to develop imagination and better language skills than watching TV. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays, there are so many entertainment activities for life. Watching TV is one of the things that most people enjoy. Also, some people are very keen on reading books.
In my opinion, there are so many benefits about reading. First of all, we can learn and improve our language skills. For example, if we read as much as English books, we can learn from it so many new vocabulary, synonyms, idioms, grammar and the writing style of an author. It also is a way to help you to be better at speaking English such as text some sentences in the book, listen to how to read on the Internet and then speak again for many times. Second, the description in the book will develop our imagination. For instance, when we read a book, we also have a habit of imagining what we read. Therefore, reading more books will improve more imagination.
However, I think the first drawback is our patience. I believe that many teenagers now don’t like reading thick books such as my sister. She bought a novel more than 250 pages 5 months ago and I’m sure that she gave up and didn't read it although she has read a half. And also, thick books aren't convenient to carry everywhere because they are heavy. Next, I think it depends on the content of the book. If it is so boring and makes the reader feel sleepy, the people who enjoy reading books don’t want to read anymore.
In conclusion, reading books has some advantages greater than watching TV that is willing to help people to develop their language skills and imagination but it also has some disadvantages.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 191, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun vocabulary seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much new vocabulary', 'a good deal of new vocabulary'.
Suggestion: much new vocabulary; a good deal of new vocabulary
... English books, we can learn from it so many new vocabulary, synonyms, idioms, grammar and the writ...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...s ago and I’m sure that she gave up and didnt read it although she has read a half. A...
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Line 3, column 289, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: aren't
... has read a half. And also, thick books arent convenient to carry everywhere because ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, second, so, then, therefore, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, such as, first of all, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1274.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.56630824373 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46785060526 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.559139784946 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 393.3 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.0098028538 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.9411764706 106.682146367 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4117647059 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.64705882353 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19545243593 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0624279527509 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0599302327944 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149395655538 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0600482783399 0.056905535591 106% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 13.0946893788 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 50.2224549098 144% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.93 12.4159519038 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.32 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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