People should follow the customs and traditions when people start to live in a new country. To what extent do you agree or disagree ?
There is an argument that a person residing new places should conform to their rules and traditions. In my opinion, I completely agree.
Residents will find so many problems if local customs are not followed. First of all, Residents will face lots of difficulties if they don’t follow the customs and traditions of host country. Taking a young student for example, it’s neccesary for a new students to create a new relationship, but if they don’t know or follow the host traditions, No one wants to make friends with a new one. Furthermore, illegal laws will be made by residences’ actions. For instance, In the Eastern country, eating dogs is normal, in western one , however, this action is totally illegal and you absolutely will be captured captured.
In the other hand, people will receive so many benefits when they accept to follow host country’s tradtitions and customs. Firstly, residences will be earned local people’s not only care but also hospitality. Absolutely if local civilians think they are respected, they are willing to make friend with these ones and new residences will have a beautiful relationship. Beside, residences can enjoy the traditions and there will not any gap between they and local people. Following the traditions meant u are able to take part in community life. U will feel totally delighted, completely happy and greatly joyful when they participate in any festival and any local civilian respect them.
In conclusion, conforming to customs and traditions of host country will make u feel easier in all things you do. Therefore residences should follow these ones when beginning a n new life in a new place.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: these
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Message: Incorrect form of the pronoun 'they'. Use: 'between them'.
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Suggestion: Therefore,
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Suggestion: an
...should follow these ones when beginning a n new life in a new place.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in conclusion, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1411.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1496350365 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95367203873 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.580291970803 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 441.0 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.3110712046 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.0666666667 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2666666667 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.13333333333 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192880337783 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0728127462222 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.053845425113 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135641921317 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0678842733003 0.056905535591 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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