As well as making money, businesses also have social responsibilities. Do you agree or disagree?
The hallmark that companies not only make money, they take social responsibilities as well. I completely agree with this idea.
In a visible aspect, Making money is a good target. First of all, there no doubt that any business wants to expand their activities. Therefore, making profit is the only way that they can improve their services and invest in other fields. Secondly, the more succesful creating money, the more taxes that they have to pay to the government. These taxes is necessary for improving social life such as: pristine environment, reducing social evil and so on.
However, These businesses also so need to consider their socially responsible manner. Environment nowadays is so polluted, and we totally know this problem is completely caused by lots of irresponsible plants. Companies’ irresponsible disposal makes these situation more and more serious. Therefore, Having responsibly environmental problem means saving the world. In the other hand, the activity such as philanthropic actions is one of effective ways not only enhance their public image but also give lots of opportunities to many unlucky people.
In conclusion, Although making profits is the highest mission, they should take socially responsible manner for their principles.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 352, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[4]
Message: You should probably use: 'are'.
Suggestion: are
...e to pay to the government. These taxes is necessary for improving social life suc...
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Line 3, column 255, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this situation' or 'these situations'?
Suggestion: this situation; these situations
...nies' irresponsible disposal makes these situation more and more serious. Therefore, Havin...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, in conclusion, no doubt, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 41.998997996 38% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1076.0 1615.20841683 67% => OK
No of words: 196.0 315.596192385 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.48979591837 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99190216261 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.65306122449 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 339.3 506.74238477 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.6049993165 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.7692307692 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0769230769 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.92307692308 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226382192446 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0807890517083 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0573361031331 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146771196249 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0569243204607 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.97 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.62 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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