People should follow the customs and traditions when people start to live in a new country. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Many argue that the foreigners have to adapt to the local traditional cultures as they reside in a different country. I totally agree with this opinion.
New residents must face a lot of difficult problems if they do not obey the social law of the local country. Firstly, they will not able to be family to the new environment. For example, a businessman lives in a foreigner country and star up an enterprise must pay attention that business law of that nation. There are many risks, not only about the law but also about the need to attract and keep customers. Secondly, the newcomers may be involved in the violation if they do not pay any respect to the custom and tradition of local people. For instance, within Singapore, ones will be a rule and dirty when they leave rubbish to the street or spit gum at the public places.
There are many benefits for foreigners as they accept the tradition of a nation where they are living. The first benefit is that local people will become more friendly when they fell newcomers show the respect to the local custom. Forming a strong binding to the local community will lead to the deeper integration and mutual knowledge. Another advantage is that the huge experience that newcomers will possess when they experience the different aspects of local traditional will help them integer to the community and avoid the isolation to society. In the national festivals, they will feel that they belong to this country.
In conclusion, I believe that the foreigners accept the locally nation conventional is necessary to integrate to the whole community.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1327.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86080586081 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62668779827 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.527472527473 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 422.1 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.9136823761 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.7857142857 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128910562397 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0478895339121 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0378487556431 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0718767152892 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0420813713055 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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