as well as making money, businesses have also social responsibilities, do you agree or disagree.
Money is one of the most important things in human’s life and society’s maintaining. We need money for our basic need of cloth, food, medicine as well for our wants like car or entertainment. The Government uses the money to solve society’s problem as drug or crime. Much money is generated in tax form by businesses. The more money businesses ear, the more tax paid, the more society’s problems solved. Besides, many employees will find a good job to improve their quality life.
To establish a company, businessmen employ a lot of material and release factory emission which can change and harm the environment so that impact on the natural creature’s life. Greenhouse gas causes global warming or agricultural pesticide toxic water source are critical examples. So, businesses need to work with the government to handle those problems by using clean energy, pure gas, and water before sending them back to the environment, improve technology to increase efficiency. Besides, they can contribute money to charity funds or build some free buildings for homeless and patient, support fee-studying fro student.
A good and sustainable society is a place where people work together to build and maintain. Businesses, besides, enlarge company scale to ear more money, they need to think about the social problems and take responsibility for them.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...od job to improve their quality life. To establish a company, businessmen ...
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Line 3, column 626, Rule ID: FOR_FRO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'for'?
Suggestion: for
...eless and patient, support fee-studying fro student. A good and sustain...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nt, support fee-studying fro student. A good and sustainable society is a ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, if, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1158.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 217.0 315.596192385 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33640552995 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04310806579 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.663594470046 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 361.8 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.3310095531 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.5 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0833333333 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.16666666667 7.06120827912 31% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0992783081567 0.244688304435 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0361404851787 0.084324248473 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0288343870456 0.0667982634062 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0656019469843 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.029605843798 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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