People sleep less than before in many countries. Why do people sleep less? What effect does it have on an individual and on society?
It is observed that humans around the world tend to sleep less as compared to the past. The main culprits behind this phenomenon are, stress from long working hours, busy schedules, hectic and unhealthy lifestyle of today’s generation. Although, it is known that such habits affect the individual on a personal level, it for surely affects the human society in which we live.
Firstly, it can be said that, stressful life has resulted in reduced night time rest. In order to earn money, people have started working overtime, which has led to lack of rest to the body as well as the brain, insomnia and depression is prevalent among youngsters due to social pressure of being successful. Secondly, staying up watching television shows or surfing the internet and social media has caused lack of rest.
Scientists argue that at least 7 hours of sleep is must for a person to perform optimally in his daily tasks. However, a mere 5-6 hours of daily sleep is observed in individuals. Moreover, jobs nowadays, if not performed attentively can result in a mistake, which can harm the individual as well the society as whole.
In conclusion, excessive workload and technological distractions have resulted in sleep deprivation and lack of attentiveness of today’s people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 64, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[1]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...ans around the world tend to sleep less as compared to the yesteryear. The culprit...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, at least, for example, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1274.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07569721116 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72585087848 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.661354581673 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 382.5 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.0415554961 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.166666667 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9166666667 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1355749817 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0465134620368 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0491199452268 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0761935984737 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0217148895047 0.056905535591 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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