People sleep less than before in many countries. Why do people sleep less? What effect does it have on an individual and on society?
It is observed that humans around the world tend to sleep less as compared to the yesteryear. The culprits behind this phenomenon are, stress from long working hours, busy schedules, hectic and unhealthy lifestyle of today’s generation. Although, it is know that such habits affect the individual on a personal level, it for surely affects the human society in which we live.
Firstly, it can be said that, stressful life is the primary reason behind reduced night time rest. In order to earn money, people have started working overtime, which has led to lack of rest to the body as well as the brain. Secondly, humans tend to socialize with each other until late night. People tend to either stay up watching television shows, surfing the internet and social media.
According to studies conducted by scientists, they have said that at least 7 hours of sleep is must for a person to perform optimally in his daily tasks. However, a mere 5-6 hours of daily sleep is observed in individuals. Moreover, this habit has resulted in rise of work place accidents and injuries, for example – A heavy machinery operator might push a wrong button that can result in an injury to himself or his coworker. Increasing number of highway accidents are related to lack of attention of the road. Such mishaps not only affect the persons involved, but their families as well.
In conclusion, excessive workload and technological distractions have resulted in sleep deprivation and lack of attentiveness of today’s people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 64, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[1]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...ans around the world tend to sleep less as compared to the yesteryear. The culprit...
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Line 1, column 259, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'known'.
Suggestion: known
...oday's generation. Although, it is know that such habits affect the individual ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, at least, for example, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1283.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09126984127 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72261554843 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.65873015873 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 384.3 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.4882950225 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.6923076923 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3846153846 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.23076923077 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149645594206 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0477204834044 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0473777818097 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0828345845721 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0128373864176 0.056905535591 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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