People think that countries should produce foods their population eats and import less food as much as possible. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Producing adequate food in order to import less eats is a controversy for every nation. While some believe that it can be beneficial, the others disagree. In my idea, it is a useful trend and in this essay I will state some reasons for my view.
To begin with, decreasing import of cuisines has many positive impacts on economy. Firstly, causing more job opportunities as an effect is considered. As more food should be produced in the country, food related industries would be developed. So, many units including factories and farms are expected to be set up or expanded. The more they grow up, the more job opportunities people will have. Decreasing jobless people is a significant factor for improvement in economy. Moreover, not only can reducing import eats effect on increasing jobs, but also it can help administrations able to prevent prices from rising. Although all expenses that should be paid to produce a food-related good, its aggregate costs would be cheaper than an import one. So, controlling prices will be possible in this occasion.
Another reason for my position is that restriction in importation food can be useful for health care scheme. Products which are imported are not accessible to process control. Nor, are there any possibility of different disease. For example, the corn which was imported last year and a kind of dangerous poison was identified in the cargo.so, Many people died because of eating them. However, related administration can check the quality and process of producing a good in the country to make sure about how healthy and safe products are.
In conclusion, I totally agree with the idea about producing enough food instead if import them because of many advantages which have been mentioned.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 45, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun eats is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...ducing adequate food in order to import less eats is a controversy for every nation....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, so, while, for example, in conclusion, kind of, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1460.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05190311419 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81117113629 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608996539792 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 468.9 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.0457208928 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.1111111111 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0555555556 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.16666666667 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207489401281 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0627627022875 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0699015836422 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132334430447 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0116704553249 0.056905535591 21% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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