People today do not feel safe either at home or when they are out. What are the causes? What are the solutions?
It is true that many people currently think that they are no longer safe both outside and inside their house. This feeling is caused by some factors, and some solutions can help to allay those fears.
There are at least two major reasons why people nowadays have to confront serious risks no matter when they are. Firstly, the unemployment and the widening gap between the rich and the poor are crucial factors behind the rising crime rate in many nations, hence citizens have to be watchful all the time even when they stay at home. Vietnam, for instance, has recently seen a significant increase in the number of people turning to crime such as burglary and robbery in order to survive. Secondly, when being out on the streets, everyone is aware of the dangers stemming from the dramatic increase in traffic. For example, the Global status report on road safety 2015 by the World Health Organization showed that around 1.25 million people worldwide die each year as a result of road traffic crashes.
To solve these aforementioned problems, some measures should be implemented. The first measure would be to provide more job training programs to help people out of poverty and into employment, so the need to steal from others would be reduced and the public would feel safer. Additionally, it is necessary to install surveillance cameras on trains and buses and along main roads because if there is a close and regular supervision in traffic, everyone who uses the roads will strictly obey traffic laws, thus the frequency of traffic accidents would be reduced in the long-term.
In conclusion, it is clear that there are various reasons why society is unsafe and people are at risk even at home, and steps need to be taken to tackle this problem.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, so, thus, at least, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1458.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46508057114 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.62 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.638831121 49.4020404114 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.545454545 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.2727272727 20.7667163134 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.6363636364 7.06120827912 179% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192316469957 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0698928932392 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.046626131601 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117276835361 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0488614064461 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.