People today often use the internet to learn about the culture of other countries. This means that it is not that important to travel to those countries. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In this day and age, when the technology develop, we can look up information easily on the internet about the diversity of culture around the world. So that some people believe it is not necessary to visit other countries to experience. Personally, I am disagree with this perspective and the essay will shed light on the reason why I have this opinion.
First and foremost, the mass media has a variety of information which do not have authenticated yet, so it is really hard for individuals to aware and select correctly the word they have read and learned. People can be misleading the countries’s culture by those report floating on social media and this problems may cause the culture identity be faded. Moreover, online data is just theoretical knowledge, researchers just know about the clue but they will never understand it clearly because they do not have any practical experience. Learning the culture of other countries without traveling to those place is the big challenge to people who have a main job of creating content about travel and explore diverse lifestyle over the world. They may not have sources or knowledge and being passive for their work.
People just stay at home learning the way of life of human in other nations without going to those locations also are the hardship for government in each country. This situation definitely can not help administrator boost economy of a country, they do not have any condition to advertise and promote their country’s images to foreigners come to travel and it will cause state budget decrease. In addition, the aviation industry may be threatened if there are no demand of flying abroad, the workers can be unemployed because of lack of job opportunities.
In conclusion, although research information about other nation’s culture on the internet is sufficient, it still has a plenty of disadvantages. People should travel to other countries to learn about the culture and lifestyle by themself
- People today often use the internet to learn about the culture of other countries This means that it is not that important to travel to those countries To what extent do you agree or disagree 78
- People today often use the internet to learn about the culture of other countries This means that it is not that important to travel to those countries To what extent do you agree or disagree 73
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, may, moreover, really, so, still, then, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1654.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0736196319 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82826078249 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558282208589 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 520.2 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 46.4122254859 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.230769231 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0769230769 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.23076923077 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.306758092697 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119799524754 0.084324248473 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100234610006 0.0667982634062 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.210625747827 0.151304729494 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0650935873877 0.056905535591 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.