People try new dangerous sports such as sky-diving or rock climbing.Should such sports be banned?

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 191, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'sports the smallest'.
Suggestion: sports the smallest
...al health. But when it comes to extreme sports smallest mistake can have catastrophic effects. ...
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Line 1, column 294, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...e many risks are involved in such sports ,like serious injurious and some time eve...
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Line 1, column 417, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Such
...not better solution to reduce such risk.Such sports requires strict supervision and ...
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Line 1, column 429, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[1]
Message: You should probably use 'require'.
Suggestion: require
...olution to reduce such risk.Such sports requires strict supervision and sufficient train...
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Line 3, column 20, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'required'.
Suggestion: required
...for participant. Greater skills are require to perform any activity of extreme spor...
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Line 3, column 28, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'performing'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'require' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: performing
...icipant. Greater skills are require to perform any activity of extreme sports. Minor m...
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Line 3, column 112, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...inor mistake in such sports can leads to serious consequences.some people argue a...
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Line 3, column 233, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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Suggestion:
...use there are many other things which is serious threats for human lives like smo...
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Line 3, column 311, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: If
... smoking, drinking and eating fast food.If extreme sports are banned then people t...
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Line 5, column 36, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... There are many ways to reduce risks involved in extreme sports. Such sports ...
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Line 5, column 88, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'performed'?
Suggestion: performed
...n extreme sports. Such sports should be perform under observation of some trained indiv...
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Line 5, column 181, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Participants
... All safety precautions should be taken.Participants should take proper and sufficient trai...
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Line 5, column 227, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ipants should take proper and sufficient training to perform any activity of such...
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Line 5, column 334, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...provides facilities for such sports must follow all the essential safety standard...
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Line 6, column 72, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'performed'?
Suggestion: performed
...down saying that, such sports should be perform under supervision of some experts.Dange...
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Line 6, column 113, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Dangerous
...rform under supervision of some experts.Dangerous companies must require license for such...
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Line 6, column 172, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: To
... must require license for such training.To lay a ban on such sports is not the an...
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Line 6, column 184, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e license for such training.To lay a ban on such sports is not the answer.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, then

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1311.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 242.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.4173553719 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82899756779 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.537190082645 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 393.3 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.8545982857 49.4020404114 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.25 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1666666667 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.41666666667 7.06120827912 20% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.01903807615 359% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.382230861409 0.244688304435 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.144014020134 0.084324248473 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.117073704969 0.0667982634062 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.266505688524 0.151304729494 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0618505785283 0.056905535591 109% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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