People who travel to another country to live, work or study for a period of time often suffer badly from homesickness.
Why it is?
What are the best ways to reduce thic problem?
Nowadays, many people have opportunities to travel abroad for study or work, yet they have to face to homesickness when they travel away from home in a long time. It is a natural reaction almost people have at the beginning.
When they live in a strange country, they will feel homesick because of some reasons. Firstly, culture and language will make them embarrassed and they have to accustom to everything. They learn how to communicate with native people and change some habits to adapt with living enviroment. In addition, some of dishes might not appropriate with their taste, so they feel uncomfortable. Moreover, change of weather is one of reasons causing sick for them. As a result, they often suffer stresses when they have many troubles so they really miss about family and country.
However, many people can control homesickness by many ways. Firstly, they build some new relationships, so they can share and talk to other people. They become to more optimistic, which lessen to homesick feeling. Other people can also give them some advices helping them improve their life, thus they can solve many problems and advoid to be stresses. Besides that, they can concentrate on study and work to forget homesickness, try their best and overcome some difficulties. Furthermore, thanks to technology development they can make a video call or send emails to their family to reduce their homesickness, which is a effective solution.
In conclusion, almost people feel homesick when travelling abroad. However, if ther prepare everything carefully, they will not be stresses so they feel less homesick.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, moreover, really, so, thus, in addition, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1358.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18320610687 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76985655859 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.572519083969 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 420.3 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.7404566248 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.875 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.375 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.75 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.118845983807 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0453605216844 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0488032828987 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0864480344389 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0515479492497 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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