In today’s society, an individual is valued against its status and possessions. Some people believe that traditional standards like dignity, goodness, faith are not vital anymore. Tis essay will discuss why I completely disagree with this statement because it is far too draconian.
First, most of the people still make friends and build relations based on long-established standards, such as trust, graciousness, honor etc. In fact, people know that a true and honest friend is far better than a famous one when you need him to be with you in your problematic time. I have a friend; she works in my home to help my mother in household chores. She is my best friend because she is loyal, trustworthy, and honest and listens to me and remains with me in every good and bad time. In short, almost all people give value to traditional morals as opposed to physical possessions and prestige when making friends.
Second, companies gauge their workers based on effort, performance, and honesty instead of their family background or status. For example, according to a survey conducted by the COMSATS University, 74% of business people are looking for business partners who are reliable, trustworthy, and dependable. Clearly, an employee must have these positive values for survival and success in a today’s competitive job environment.
Overall, this essay discussed old-fashioned values are still crucial when making friends and building relations; employers also assess their employees based on these old standards. In my opinion, I totally disagree with this believe that old-fashioned values are looking unimportant.
- blood sports have become a hot topic for debate in recent years As society develops it is increasingly seen as an unvivilized activity and cruel to the helpless animals that are killed All blood sports should be banned Discuss the main arguments for this 78
- Most modern families have both parents working and as a result children spend less and less time with their parents.What is the reason for this?What problems can this cause? 70
- The chart below shows numbers of incidents and injuries per 100 million passenger miles travelled (PMT) by transportation type in 2002.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 84
- The bat chart below gives information about vehicle ownership in China.Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information. 61
- Some people think that art is an essential subject for children at school while others think it is a waste of time. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 142, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... such as trust, graciousness, honor etc. In fact, people know that a true and hon...
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Line 7, column 226, Rule ID: BELIEVE_BELIEF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'belief' (noun) instead of believe (verb)?
Suggestion: belief
...y opinion, I totally disagree with this believe that old-fashioned values are looking u...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, look, second, so, still, for example, in fact, in short, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1380.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36964980545 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9833981729 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.642023346304 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 411.3 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.3361834064 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.153846154 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7692307692 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.07692307692 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136267070812 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0486680601972 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0468532279608 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0841503180744 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0406322079033 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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