The personal information of many individuals is lead by large Internet companies or enterprises do you think the advantages of these outwait the disadvantages
In this modern era, server Internet well cities and social networking apps search as Facebook Google Flipkart and Amazon are securing the confidential data of users during their signup process. In my opinion, the benefits of disservice outweigh its disadvantages this essay will analyse both aspects in detail with relevant examples.
There are 2 major benefits of recording the personal information of the user firstly this data is used to post a relevant advertisement on the web page for people this is because during the registration process people often experience their likes and dislikes therefore This correlation sends customer-friendly ads, which helps users to purchase their desired product or services. Secondly, these electronic media use customer’s data to make their service convenient and flexible. In other word, these enterprise combine customer Internet and advice and developer user friendly website or application for example the The latest press report by Google states that they use customer data to improve their services.
The drawbacks of this exercise could not be ignored. The major drawback is that Sometime this gained information is used in election time to cast votes of the public rest of the participating party’s bees use this data to affect peoples opinion test parties develop their election be happy manifest on the basis of this public data which secure huge votes for them for instance in 2019 a famous newspaper the Times of India reported that National Party in India used the personal data of people to secure their votes therefore there should be stringent laws so that confidential data of inhabitant would not be misused.
Hammering the last nail, it has been observed that networking firms are using the personal fact of the Populars, the benefits of these methodology are to provide customers related advertisement and to improve their current service. However, the main side effect is the misuse of users data to cast public vote during the election despite this negative I firmly believe that the advantages of this exercise outweigh its disadvantage
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- The personal information of many individuals is lead by large Internet companies and organisations do you think the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages 56
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Suggestion:
...the advantages of this exercise outweigh its disadvantage
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1786.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 335.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33134328358 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73789443532 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561194029851 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 577.8 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 37.0 20.2975951904 182% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 147.404038674 49.4020404114 298% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 198.444444444 106.682146367 186% => OK
Words per sentence: 37.2222222222 20.7667163134 179% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.0 7.06120827912 170% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0758962142103 0.244688304435 31% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0379666028588 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0207292638218 0.0667982634062 31% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0530000542215 0.151304729494 35% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0230357023299 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.3 13.0946893788 170% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 25.46 50.2224549098 51% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.9 11.3001002004 167% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.23 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.52 8.58950901804 122% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.8 10.1190380762 166% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 10.7795591182 176% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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