The personal information of many individuals is lead by large Internet companies and organisations do you think the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 497, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this enterprise' or 'these enterprises'?
Suggestion: this enterprise; these enterprises
...convenient and flexible. In other word, these enterprise combine customer Internet and advice an...
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Line 3, column 614, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
...ndly website or application for example the The latest press report by Google states th...
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Line 3, column 614, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'The' is left.
Suggestion: the; The
...ndly website or application for example the The latest press report by Google states th...
^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for example, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 41.998997996 40% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 897.0 1615.20841683 56% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 160.0 315.596192385 51% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.60625 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55655882008 4.20363070211 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85864232416 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 176.041082164 64% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.7 0.561755894193 125% => OK
syllable_count: 287.1 506.74238477 57% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.2975951904 158% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 96.482951862 49.4020404114 195% => OK
Chars per sentence: 179.4 106.682146367 168% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.0 20.7667163134 154% => OK
Discourse Markers: 16.2 7.06120827912 229% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.38176352705 46% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.106500221079 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0550616916285 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0391479429447 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0894574636938 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0194109916445 0.056905535591 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.0 13.0946893788 160% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 22.08 50.2224549098 44% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.1 11.3001002004 160% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.85 12.4159519038 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.24 8.58950901804 131% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.1190380762 146% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 10.7795591182 176% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.