Planet earth can not sustain us unless countries limit their population. To what extent do you agree?
World population has increased in ever decade. Even if countries do not restrain their citizens, our planet will not encourage all humans. Although restriction on population count is strongly connects with human basic right but we have faced to limited capacity of the earth which needs to smart consumption and environment protection. This essay totally agree with this statement because overpopulation will leads imbalance of ecosystem and scarcities of natural resources.
First of all, we are confronting environmental problems that caused by human activities such as carbon food print or wastes in landfills. Population growth increases environmental degradation including air pollution, water pollution and soil contamination. Accordingly, air pollution is biggest reason that affects on ozone layer depletion and consequently global warming increases year by year. For example, air quality have dramatically decreased after 1950's while world population booming by billions in every decade. So, climate change that caused by air pollution is arguably the greatest environmental issue facing our planet with increased more frequently storm, flood, drought and bush fires. Therefore, countries should launch prevention policy from overpopulation that can focus on birth rate and immigration to crowded city, because population growth can result from an increase in births and immigration towards to mega cities.
On the other hand, the advances of technologies have made us the dominant species on our planet. Humans exploit the natural resources for economic development as much as they can. In this way, overpopulation may environmentally destructive means order to exploit all natural resources until it exhausted. According to recent survey, world population will increase by 3 to 4 billion in next three decades. As a result, deforestation, soil erosion and other consequences can arise from the careless and excessive consumption of those resources. For this reason, population growth is priority issue that strongly connects with further of the world.
In conclusion, overpopulation can result of birth rate growth, immigration to crowded areas and etc. World population expansion lead environmental degradation. In my opinion, countries should launch effective policy that predicted from overpopulation such as immigration law and also improve their government incentive towards to family planning.
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- The chart below gives demographic information about the ten most populated countries from 2000 to the present as well as the projected population in 2050.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where rel 67
- Planet earth can not sustain us unless countries limit their population. To what extent do you agree? 89
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, consequently, first, if, may, so, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result, first of all, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 35.0 8.3376753507 420% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2067.0 1615.20841683 128% => OK
No of words: 353.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.85552407932 5.12529762239 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14329916986 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 176.041082164 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603399433428 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 630.0 506.74238477 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.8070833004 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.789473684 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5789473684 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.05263157895 7.06120827912 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.113433853117 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0333124033224 0.084324248473 40% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0437401778268 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0756226157427 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0352635685303 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.71 12.4159519038 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.4 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 78.4519038076 139% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.