No one can deny, environment problems rise rapidly day-by-day. Today, each and every creature face the lot of natural problems. Although, this crisis generate with many reasons, but more usage of plastic shopping bags is one of the major cause of natural problems. Majority of people reckon that, plastic bags ought to ban by the government. I complete agree with this statement. I shall put down the appropriate reasons in further paragraphs.
To commence with, people highly used those bags which made with plastic material. Rationality behind this, this bags are more cheaper rather than other kinds of bags likewise those bags which made with clothes or papers. On the other hand, shopping bags generate the numerous issues in environment. More precisely, plastic bags never destroy and it become a cause of water pollution alongside death of animals. To instance, previous research claim that, mostly marine and terrestrial animal died when they eat plastic bags. For example, over the few decades, mostly turtles died eaten the plastic bags because it is very lightweight and when turtle see this bags in the sea so they thing it is jelly fish and they eaten it. According to my perception, plastic bags are become the huge cause of death of animal species, so today having a dire need to reduce the utilization of shopping bags in order to prevent the environment or animals.
Furthermore, Although, government take the many steps for prevent our environment, but it is not enough. High authority must be proved the awareness and educate the people with assistance of those organizations which do the jobs for protection of nature. If people have the knowledge about this serious crisis then they reduce the utilization of plastic bags. According to my perspective and experience, plastic bags are not only harmful for animals, it also pollute the air, soil and water sources. For example, Some people burn this bags. They collected large amount of shopping bags and throw into the fire. As a consequence, this fire produce the harmful gases into the air and this is also became a cause of acid rain.
To conclude, plastic bags are highly demanded by people because it pocket friendly. Apart from this, this is main reason of environment problems likewise, air pollution, water pollution as well as it is also cause of animal death. Government should be made hard and fast rules against the production and usage of plastic bags. It is only solution of this serious crisis.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, likewise, so, then, well, apart from, for example, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 23.0 8.3376753507 276% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2070.0 1615.20841683 128% => OK
No of words: 413.0 315.596192385 131% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01210653753 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50803742585 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5667823946 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.513317191283 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 651.6 506.74238477 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 16.0721442886 149% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.706491151 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.25 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2083333333 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 15.0 3.9879759519 376% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.281468757442 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0806145405852 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0466876897086 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171338369789 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0248907072938 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.48 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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