It is irrefutable to say that nowadays pollution is increasing day by day in lakes, rivers and sea, it is a serious trouble for every individual. Water pollution affect health of numerous people and animals in different ways. This essay shall discuss behind this phenomenon and suggeste some measure to solve it.
To begin with, due to growth in industrialization plenty amount of Chemicals are released in sea and river which cause major problem for flora and fauna. Moreover, every species are important for Maintaining the chain of ecosystem. Numerous watery animals such as fish, snacks and tortoise are dying due to this emission and this is disturbing life cycle of nature. Furthermore, transportation in the sea is also major reason behind dying species as it creat lot of noise pollution and realised oil in sea which is very hazardous for animals. in exemplification, goods transported from thousands of kilometers via sea routes ships released plenty amount oil in sea which kill myriads of animals in the ocean.
Additionally, government should make strict rules against dangerous chemical realised by industries in rivers and sea. People should make habbit to store their garbage at one place and it should be process well rather than realised in ocean. Besides, way of transportation should change from sea to air which is more beneficial for animal.
To recapitulate, it is responsibility of every individual and government to protect animal and save environment. Some strict rules should be made against industries to control their wastage chemical and utilize it properly.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, furthermore, if, moreover, so, well, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1343.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26666666667 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96231359025 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56862745098 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 423.0 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.0172694787 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.307692308 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6153846154 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.69230769231 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222977033615 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0779395394857 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0501086225709 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123609825071 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0731771344674 0.056905535591 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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