It is irrefutable to say that nowadays pollution is increasing day by day in lakes, rivers and sea, it is serious trouble for every individual. Water pollution affects the health of numerous people and animals in different ways. This essay shall discuss this phenomenon and suggest some measures to solve it.
To begin with, due to growth in industrialization plenty amount of Chemicals are released in the sea and river which causes a major problem for flora and fauna. Moreover, every species are important for maintaining the chain of the ecosystem. Numerous watery animals such as fish, snacks and tortoises are dying due to this emission and this is disturbing the life cycle of nature. Furthermore, transportation in the sea is also a major reason behind dying species as it creates a lot of noise pollution and realized oil in the sea which is very hazardous for animals. in exemplification, goods transported from thousands of kilometres via sea routes ships released plenty amount oil in the sea which kills myriads of animals in the ocean.
Additionally, the government should make strict rules against dangerous chemicals realized by industries in rivers and sea. People should make a habit to store their garbage in one place and it should be processed well rather than realized in the ocean. Besides, the way of transportation should change from sea to air which is more beneficial for animals.
To recapitulate, it is the responsibility of every individual and government to protect animals and save the environment. Some strict rules should be made against industries to control their wastage chemical and utilize it properly.
- Most of big cities are overpopulated Why do people still move to big cities Give your opinion and example 73
- Nowadays more people are choosing to live with their friends or alone rather than with their families this trend is likely to have a negative impact on community To what extent do you agree or disagree 56
- some people think that newspaper are the best media to learn and get information from while others believe that the internet is a better source discuss both views and give your own opinion 84
- The difference in age between parents and their children has increased compared to the past Do you think advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages 56
- The difference in age between parents and their children has increased compared to the past Do you think advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 570, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: In
...ea which is very hazardous for animals. in exemplification, goods transported from...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, furthermore, if, moreover, so, well, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1383.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16044776119 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97841374384 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.529850746269 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 434.7 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.8011761948 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.384615385 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6153846154 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.69230769231 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223656961714 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0781662651675 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0499748968738 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124498238132 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0739284201892 0.056905535591 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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