Building belongs to history are quite crucial for citizens of the country as it provides knowledge and reminiscing the past. Some individuals think that government should breaks all historical buildings and replace with contemporary buildings. I disagree with the given notion, and this essay shall discuss about an old building advantages.
To commence with, the history of any country is essential for their people as it provides them knowledge and they can get to know with personal touch with the buildings. Some buildings are connected with sacrifice of their national heros and new generation get to know more about the past civilisations. To epitome, house of bhagat sighs the great freedom fighter of india who lived at Punjab is the renowned tourists place nowadays for public. Moreover, ancient history building are connected with the social issues and culture of the country.
Nonetheless, government should build new building for civilisation apart from old historical buildings, which would be more benefited for them such as hospitals, schools, and libraries. Furthermore, in these types of buildings people get Better education and great healthcare amenities. They can read for longer period of time and enhance there knowledge which is absolutely required for their tremendous growth in the future. Besides this, senior citizens can spend their leisure time by reading books and feel more stressed free. Moreover, government must encourage to the people for visit historical places and also know more about culture of the country.
To recapitulate, government should encourage to the citizens regarding historical building and visitor should be appreciated by the authority as it is connected with the culture, however, law enforcement agency should also build new building for better medical treatment and education purpose.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 330, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'advantage'?
Suggestion: advantage
...say shall discuss about an old building advantages. To commence with, the history of an...
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Line 5, column 313, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...are amenities. They can read for longer period of time and enhance there knowledge which is ab...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, furthermore, however, if, moreover, nonetheless, regarding, so, apart from, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1568.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.5406360424 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78102423909 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.540636042403 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 476.1 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.9684900919 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.615384615 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7692307692 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.53846153846 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.331542107784 0.244688304435 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129478884782 0.084324248473 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.116804676093 0.0667982634062 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.233529779151 0.151304729494 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0807109587811 0.056905535591 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.85 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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