A poor infrastructure hinders under-developed countries from progressing and modernizing. Some people think that this should be the first problem tackled by foreign aid. To what extent do you agree with this opinion?
It is true that some people argue that infrastructure in under-developed countries should be the top of investment priorities by international aid. Because there are a variety of economic and social advantages, I completely agree with this point.
Firstly, infrastructure advancement is considered to be the key factor of economic development. Transport infrastructure such as roads and railways provide better way to deliver goods and reducing costs of transportation. For example, building of railways will benefit agriculture as the farmers are able to sell their products in towns where they are far away from. In addition, infrastructure also creates opportunities to build businesses, and to attract local and foreign investment and partnerships. Because of the lack of money, small companies rely on general facilities to build up.
Secondly, I believe that investment in infrastructure can raise people’s living standards in those countries. Lack of adequate infrastructure not only holds lack economic development, it also cause additional costs in terms of time, effort and money of the people for accessing essential social service such as healthcare and education. Besides, by improving street lighting and CCTV cameras, the number of crimes also decrease. For example, the likelihood of finding people all alone in street or in their house might attract killers or robbers.
In conclusion, I agree that the beneficial effects of improved infrastructure largely contributes to economic and social development.
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Message: Did you mean 'causes'?
Suggestion: causes
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, second, secondly, so, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1303.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 229.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.68995633188 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.38745871235 2.80592935109 121% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.615720524017 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 406.8 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.2996786028 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.583333333 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0833333333 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.83333333333 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179084784232 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0633973868533 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0730691791562 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125224436403 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.110825465547 0.056905535591 195% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.72 12.4159519038 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.27 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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